Claustrophobia is a scary story about a text message conversation on Whatsapp between two teenage girls named Natasha and Nina. (It is based on a story by author M. Croche from Argentina.)
Natasha: Nina.
Natasha: Please help me Nina!
Nina: ???
Nina: Who is this???
Nina: How did you get this number???
Natasha: It’s me Natasha.
Natasha: Please help.
Natasha: I’m trapped somewhere and I can’t get out.
Natasha: It’s very dark and very narrow.
Natasha: I can barely move. I don’t know how I got here.
Natasha: I tried to call you but I don’t have any credit.
Nina: Mother of God! Is this some kind of sick joke?
Nina: It’s not funny! Who are you?
Nina: I’m going to report you to the police.
Natasha: What are you talking about, Nina?
Natasha: Help me! I’m begging you!
Natasha: For God’s sake, please help me!
Natasha: Please tell my parents to come and look for me.
Nina: Natasha?
Nina: It’s not possible.
Nina: It can’t be you.
Natasha: It’s me! Who else would it be? Please help me
Nina: It’s a prank. It has to be.
Natasha: Why are you acting so strange?
Natasha: It’s me! I swear it is.
Natasha: Why don’t you believe me?
Natasha: What’s wrong with you?
Nina: Natasha is dead.
Nina: She was my best friend and she died two days ago.
Nina: The funeral was this morning.
Nina: So I’ll ask you again…
Nina: Who the hell are you and how did you get this number?
Natasha: I don’t know what you’re talking about Nina
Natasha: Why do you say that?
Natasha: I’m locked in a dark place and I can’t get out
Natasha: Don’t you understand?
Natasha: Please!!! Please help!!!
Nina: What was the last movie we saw together?
Natasha: What? Why do you ask me that?
Natasha: Nina, for the love of God, please help me.
Nina: If you’re Natasha then you should know that.
Nina: What was the last movie we saw together?
Natasha: Don’t be a jerk!
Natasha: I can’t remember.
Natasha: I’m terrified and you want me to answer stupid questions.
Nina: Answer me or I’ll block you
Natasha: No! Don’t do that!
Natasha: Wait for me to remember.
Natasha: I think it was The Notebook.
Natasha: Is that it?
Natasha: We both cried like crazy at the end…
Natasha: That’s it, right?
Nina: What grade did you get in Biology?
Natasha: Nina for God’s sake! Stop it!
Nina: Answer me.
Natasha: OK OK
Natasha: It’s a trick question.
Natasha: The old woman didn’t give us our grades yet.
Natasha: Do you believe me now?
Nina: Natasha?
Nina: But how can it be you?
Nina: Yesterday night I saw you laid out in the coffin.
Nina: This morning I saw them lower you into the ground.
Nina: It can’t be you. It just can’t!
Nina: Where are you?
Natasha: I don’t know.
Natasha: It’s dark and cold.
Natasha: I can barely move.
Nina: My God! My God, Natasha!
Nina: You’re buried alive!
Nina: YOU’RE STILL INSIDE THE COFFIN!
Nina: Natasha?
Nina: Are you still there?
Natasha: Yes.
Natasha: I think you’re right.
Natasha: But how?
Natasha: How did I get here?
Natasha: Who put me here?
Nina: I told you. You died two days ago.
Nina: At least that’s what they said.
Nina: The doctors pronounced you dead.
Nina: They said your heart stopped.
Nina: We all thought you were dead.
Natasha: But I’m not dead.
Nina: You must have been buried alive.
Nina: I read about these rare cases where people appear to be dead.
Nina: But they’re not really dead.
Nina: They have some weird medical condition.
Nina: They’re catatonic or cataleptic
Nina: Or something like that.
Nina: Everyone thinks they’re dead.
Nina: And they get buried alive.
Natasha: You think that’s what happened?
Nina: It must be.
Nina: If it’s really you and you’re really alive…
Nina: Then that must be what happened.
Nina: It has to be.
Nina: Oh my God, Natasha… You’re alive!
Nina: I’ll call your parents right now.
Natasha: Do it! Hurry, please.
Natasha: I’m starting to feel like I’m short of breath.
Natasha: Nina?
Natasha: Nina???
Natasha: Answer me Nina!
Natasha: Nina???
Nina: Forgive me. I’m back.
Nina: I just called your parents.
Nina: At first they didn’t believe me.
Nina: It took a while to convince them.
Nina: They’re on their way.
Nina: They’re coming with an ambulance.
Natasha: That’s good Nina but tell them to hurry!
Natasha: I don’t know how much longer I can stand this.
Nina: Hang on.
Nina: What I don’t understand is why they buried you with a cell phone.
Nina: Who came up with an idea like that?
Natasha: I don’t know and I don’t care.
Natasha: I just want to get out of here.
Natasha: I feel like I’m losing my mind.
Natasha: Nina?
Natasha: Nina???
Natasha: Nina don’t leave me alone!
Nina: Sorry Natasha. I just contacted a doctor.
Nina: He says you need to remain calm.
Nina: It’s very important.
Nina: Just calm down and breathe normally
Nina: Until they can get you out of there
Nina: Because otherwise the air will run out.
Nina: Try to relax as much as you can
Nina: Help is on the way. Do you understand?
Natasha: Yes.
Natasha: But it’s hard for me to relax.
Natasha: It’s difficult to breathe
Natasha: And I’m panicking.
Natasha: And there’s something on my feet.
Natasha: Something keeps rubbing against me.
Natasha: Maybe they’re worms?
Natasha: Oh God, I hope it’s not worms.
Natasha: I hate worms.
Nina: Calm down. You’re imagining things.
Natasha: But what if they’re worms?
Natasha: Or spiders. Or rats?
Natasha: Oh God, I’m terrified of rats!
Nina: Calm down Natasha.
Natasha: The air is running out.
Natasha: For real.
Nina: Help is on the way.
Nina: Your parents say they’re close to the cemetery.
Nina: I’m talking to your dad on the phone right now.
Natasha: They still haven’t arrived???
Natasha: I can’t take this anymore Nina!
Natasha: I can hardly breathe!
Natasha: And there’s something down here!
Natasha: I swear! There’s something crawling on my feet!
Natasha: I turned up the light on my cell phone but I can’t see what it is.
Natasha: Nina?
Natasha: Nina!
Nina: They’re two blocks away
Natasha: I can’t wait anymore!
Natasha: I’m suffocating!
Natasha: I don’t have enough air Nina.
Natasha: Tell my dad to hurry please.
Natasha: PLEASE!
Natasha: I CAN’T BREATHE NINA.
Natasha: TELL MY DAD.
Natasha: TELL HIM TO HURRY.
Natasha: NINA PLEASE TELL MY PARENTS TO HURRY
Natasha: BECAUSE I CAN’T TAKE IT ANYMORE
Natasha: I CAN’T BREATHE ANYMORE
Natasha: AND SOMETHING IS CRAWLING UP MY LEGS!
Natasha: NINA PLEASE.
Nina: LOL
Natasha: NINA!
Nina: Hahaha.
Natasha: NINA? WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING?
Nina: Hehehehehe.
Natasha: NINA??
Nina: I guess I can tell you now.
Natasha: WHAT???
Nina: There’s no help on the way.
Nina: I was lying.
Nina: I was keeping you busy so you wouldn’t try to contact anyone else.
Natasha: WHAT??
Natasha: WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT NINA?
Natasha: I’M SUFFOCATING!
Nina: Are you really so stupid?
Nina: Haven’t you realized by now?
Nina: It was me who gave you the poison that left you like this.
Nina: I injected you again at the funeral.
Nina: And I ​​put your cell phone in the coffin.
Nina: I wanted you to know who did this to you.
Natasha: WHAT??
Natasha: WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT NINA?
Natasha: I’M SUFFOCATING!
Nina: I know.
Nina: And now it’s too late to ask for help.
Natasha: BUT WHY??
Natasha: WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME??
Natasha: WHAT DID I EVER DO TO YOU??
Nina: You have to ask?
Nina: You don’t remember?
Nina: You don’t remember when you stole my boyfriend?
Nina: I was in love with Martin and you took him from me.
Natasha: BUT THAT WAS TWO YEARS AGO!!
Natasha: WE MADE UP!!
Natasha: YOU GOT OVER IT
Nina: Well, I guess I never really got over it.
Nina: I loved Martin ever since I was 7 years old.
Nina: And you betrayed me.
Nina: And it never stopped hurting.
Nina: And I’ve hated you ever since.
Nina: I’ve been planning this for a long time, Natasha.
Nina: I wanted to see you suffer.
Natasha: NO!
Natasha: WARN MY PARENTS!
Natasha: I CAN’T BREATHE ANYMORE!!
Nina: You deserve it.
Nina: Goodbye forever, Natasha.
Nina: Enjoy your stay underground…
Nina: With the rats and the spiders and the worms…
Nina: For all eternity.
Nina: 🐀 🕷 🐛 😭 😜
that was lame. I mean seriously…she killed her best friend for a boy!! And Natasha could have contacted her parents instead of Nina…dumb girl 😑
Kind of lame especially considering the reason she did it. She should’ve went for the guy too. She should’ve punished him as well cuz I mean come on, he went for her best friend too.
didn’t expect that!😱 but over a boy? c’mon i thought it was chicks before d!cks! 😑
WOAH!!! I DID NOT SEE THAT TWIST COMING!!!!!! 10/10
This reminds me of the story something alive I don’t know 🤔 #ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh#lol
This is so me. The title should be my name LOL
Hey, not bad. Not bad at all—I especially like the fact that the girl was buried with her PHONE. Thought that might have been a nice bit of dark social commentary, though it ends up being explained (did you ever think about leaving it unexplained? Just asking.) Oh, also? If I may, perhaps take a look at the MOTIVE of the twist ending, there? It’s just kind of predictable that the problem should be a boyfriend, you know? I’d like to see it maybe about something else—maybe something that goes with the whole millennial obsession with social media, etc? Just suggesting! Maybe make it about NOTHING AT ALL; sometimes that’s the creepiest stuff, y’know? Anyway, don’t listen to me. I liked your story—good going, man.
-b
Oh my god. Ohhhhh my god. Wow. Also I’m loving the new site layout.
oh it was okay
Hahaha…karma’s a b*tch
And u call this a scary story? ?
OK. The story isn’t a good as some others, but I respect that at least a little time was put into making it. Good twist. Wording could have been better. Overall, I rate 5/10! :)
I love the new website layout!! :D
Idk if it changed for anyone else or if its just my cp tho haha…
She can contact her “friend” but not her parent on What’s app ???
Jigsaw/John Kramer: GAME OVER. Natasha: NOOOOOO DON’T DON’T!
Omg this was such a good story
that was such a good story!!!
What a twist
Finally SFK.is back…I loved the twist as usual. Great job again.
I really wasn’t expecting that twist in the end. It really surprised me! Also, I have claustrophobia, and the whole time I was reading that it was hard for me to breathe! Bravo! 10/10
that was lit. please more
Bad story.
SFK i’m so glad there are new posts! The story was AWESOME!!
OH MY GOD……WOAH….!!!!!!!!
Such a good story!!! Glad you’re posting more SFK!!