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Hieroglyphics

The Hieroglyphics is a story submitted by a user named Duality.

Hieroglyphics

Mexico is a beautiful country, but there are some places in Mexico that are anything but beautiful. In some border towns, crime corrupts the streets and the government is based on greed and cruelty.

What is less known, however, is the disturbing incident that even the Mexican President himself took notice of, an event that was sealed away and sworn to be forgotten, until now.

Recently, a journal was found in the house where the incident happened that would surely prove that supernatural forces are a terrifying reality.

Exerpt from the Journal of Anderson Marlow:

Friday March 1, 2003
My daughter Julie and I found this place, a month after my beloved wife died. It is run down and mouldy (and I swear I saw a rat in the kitchen) but this trash-heap is all we can really afford.

Saturday March 2,
Julie has settled in nicely and even managed to make some friends, although with who I’m not exactly sure. Whatever keeps her happy I guess. I don’t know why but this place gives me the creeps. Must be the stress of moving and settling into a new home.

Monday March 4,
I visited a shabby little store today with Julie, and the weirdest thing happened. I told the old man working behind the counter that we had just moved in to the first house on the right and he just gave me a weird look – as if he’d seen a ghost! He told me to seal up my mailbox for some reason and told me something odd had happened there. He wouldn’t say what it was and I wasn’t paying much attention to him. He seemed a little crazy.

Tuesday March 5,
I checked the mailbox today and for some weird reason there was something heavy in it. I picked it out and it was a stone tablet. From what I saw it was just and arm that had a red mark on the forearm. Later in the day though, Julie came up to me crying. I asked her what’s wrong and she pointed at her left arm. Sure enough, it was scratched and bruised. She should have learned not to jump into hedges.

Wednesday March 6,
Things are getting weirder everyday. The mailbox contained a new stone tablet with another weird hieroglyphic. This time it seemed to be depicting a scratched right arm. An hour later, Julie came crying again with a cut on her right arm. Weird. Moreover, I’ve looked up the house’s history and it turns out it was the base for a cult that had sacrificial rituals where parts of the body were sacrificed on different days. Perhaps the old man was right after all?

Saturday March 9,
This is horrible! Three more stone tablets have come in the mail and Julie has been scratched horribly. I can’t even take her outside because she is so disfigured. She’s scared of leaving her room and so am I. Also, the hieroglyphs that have come in actually form a body figure. But one piece is missing – the chest. I don’t want to know what that means. Now we’re just waiting. Waiting for the final thing.

Sunday March 10,
I should have listened. Because now she’s gone. My Julie. She’s dead. The final piece of the puzzle came in, and within the blink of an eye, her chest began to bleed and her eyes lost life. Her heart was gone. Ripped from her chest. Bloody. And now, the mailbox is full again. My left arm’s beginning to bleed. Please help me.

(The final parts of the journal were unable to be recovered as they were unreadable. The writings were smeared with blood. But we can probably assume what fate he suffered. Especially since several hieroglyphs were recovered at the house where the bodies of Julie and Anderson were found, blood-smeared and torn open.)

(Ok so this is a shot of writing I’m pitching, hope you read and – better still – like it :D )

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60 comments

  • this story is awesome!! ^^
    @ilovetacos: your story is creepy..(shudders) but, its still cool, though.x]

  • when i read name of this story i thought it was about my handwriting now i that i read whole story i say its awesome.

  • Please help me.Please…I don’t know what to do anymore.I woke up this morning just to see the note that my mother left me.She told me she had gone shopping and I tought it was okay at first but then…After an hour of TV I heard the door opening and I didn’t say anything,thinking it was my mom.I wasn’t paying attention to the TV anymore,so I heard her going upstairs,and then in her room.Half an hour later I went into the kitchen to grab a sandwich from the fridge.As I closed the door,I saw a shadow moving quick.It scared the crap out of me and my sandwich…But it was only my mom.I didn’t hear her go into the kitchen so I guess it was normal for me to be surprised.I decided to go upstairs to play minecraft on my computer but before I could go upstairs,I heard my mom’s voice calling me from upstairs.Horrified,I ran outside,screaming.I saw my mom coming out of the house,crying.She told me that she heard me calling her twice.Once when i was at the TV and when I was at the bathroom.I told her I have never been to the bathroom since she came back.We were so scared,we took out the car from the garage and mom drove as fast as she could.After a few minutes,she completely stopped the car,so I thought we could go outside to calm down a little.Before I could ask ,I saw my mom locking the windows.Not knowing what she was up to,I guessed that maybe the “thing” was following us.Looking behind,I saw my mom running as fast as she could towards us.It was too late.The “thing” next to me,who was sitting in te driver’s seat,said in a rusty,metallic voice:”You know the movie,right?:Two moms,no son….

  • stupid cults. i read a book by an author in england and the book was about cults brainwashing people. SFK can you find storys about cults and satinist’s?

  • WOW The Stories Written By Users In This Site Usually Don’t Scare Me But This One Is Scary And creepy

  • This is an amazing story! He shouldn’t have opened the mailbox… Anyhow, I still love the story!

  • @nightlock
    Thank you very much for the compliment and no, you got the name just right :)
    @happenstance
    If you want something scarier, try the Midnight Game or Bloody Mary – you may like those.

  • Great job Duality!!! I wish I was as good a writer as you
    ( sorry if I spelled your name wrong)

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