Intruder Alert is a creepy story about a man who sees a news report one night about a killer on the loose in the area and hears a noise downstairs.
It was the middle of the night and I was in the bedroom, trying to relax. I changed the channel on the TV and saw that the local news was on. At the bottom of the screen, there was a breaking news alert.
“Murderer on the loose… Hiding in the vicinity… Police warning everyone to be on the alert… Suspect is armed and dangerous…”
I was just drifting off to sleep when I was awakened by a strange noise downstairs. It sounded like there was someone in the house.
At that moment, my heart began beating fast and I broke into a cold sweat. Straining my ears to listen, I thought I heard another noise. It was the sound of a door creaking.
It wasn’t my imagination. There was an intruder in the house.
“I have to get out of here, fast!” I thought.
I slipped off the bed as quietly as possible and crept towards the window. My body was shaking with fear and I was hoping I didn’t make any noise.
Just then, I heard faint footsteps making their way up the stairs. It sounded like more than one person. At any second, they would burst through the door. I had to get away.
I climbed out the window and onto the garage roof, moving as fast as I could without making too much noise. At the edge of the roof, I grabbed the drainpipe and lowered myself down until I dropped into the garden.
As I paused, I looked up at the window I had just escaped from and saw the lights go on.
“That was close!” I thought.
A chill ran down my spine as I thought about what would have happened if they caught me.
I made my way to the bottom of the garden and into the woods. Once I was safely hidden by the trees, I broke into a run. I pushed onwards, stumbling through the darkness, moving through the undergrowth, until I came to another housing estate.
Clutching my knife, I headed towards another house.
nice twist… its really the greatest story i’ve read so far
sorry dude ,truce :(
Nifty twist!
@bullies are losers I’m not about to argue with some idiot over a website… I never said I was better than you so you make no sense… And I’ve had more stories posted than you… I haven’t seen any of yours get posted
Ahahaha NICE ONE.
and i said sort of predictable
I KNEW THERE WAS A TWIST. I thought this story was awfully gonna be like a similar one except there’s a girl.
IM CONFUSED WHAT WAS HE RUNNING AWAY FROM THE POLICE OR SOMETHING DONT BAD GUYS JUST LIKE STAB WHOEVERS IN THEIR WAY
Wow! I really didn’t see that coming! Well done SFK, best twist i ever read!
I did see it, stories that seem that obvious usually has a twist where the character is the murderer.
@bullies are losers, it seems as if you know how every story on here will end… Just admit it, even you did not see that one coming
Didn’t see that coming..
I thought it would be his friend or family and he was scared for nothing XD
That was unpredictable…awesome story.
OMG! HE IS the murderer.
TOTALLY UNPREDICTABLE KEEP IT UP SFK LOVED THIS
@Bullies Are Losers you always find almost everything predictable even if it isn’t even close to being predicted!!
But this story was very nice.. Awesome twist!!
Ooh…How unpredictable! :D
That caught me off guard too!
Great story! What a twist in the end!!!
that was sort of predictable due to multiple footsteps and reading similar story on tell me your story
It was unpredictable.
Well they are humans with feelings anyhow..
So murderers can feel fear too? Who knew :/
OOOOOOOOOHHH! YOU GOT ME SFK! YOU GOT ME GOOD! did not see that coming.
So he was the killer and the noise he heard were the people living in the house coming back