Intruder Alert is a creepy story about a man who sees a news report one night about a killer on the loose in the area and hears a noise downstairs.
It was the middle of the night and I was in the bedroom, trying to relax. I changed the channel on the TV and saw that the local news was on. At the bottom of the screen, there was a breaking news alert.
“Murderer on the loose… Hiding in the vicinity… Police warning everyone to be on the alert… Suspect is armed and dangerous…”
I was just drifting off to sleep when I was awakened by a strange noise downstairs. It sounded like there was someone in the house.
At that moment, my heart began beating fast and I broke into a cold sweat. Straining my ears to listen, I thought I heard another noise. It was the sound of a door creaking.
It wasn’t my imagination. There was an intruder in the house.
“I have to get out of here, fast!” I thought.
I slipped off the bed as quietly as possible and crept towards the window. My body was shaking with fear and I was hoping I didn’t make any noise.
Just then, I heard faint footsteps making their way up the stairs. It sounded like more than one person. At any second, they would burst through the door. I had to get away.
I climbed out the window and onto the garage roof, moving as fast as I could without making too much noise. At the edge of the roof, I grabbed the drainpipe and lowered myself down until I dropped into the garden.
As I paused, I looked up at the window I had just escaped from and saw the lights go on.
“That was close!” I thought.
A chill ran down my spine as I thought about what would have happened if they caught me.
I made my way to the bottom of the garden and into the woods. Once I was safely hidden by the trees, I broke into a run. I pushed onwards, stumbling through the darkness, moving through the undergrowth, until I came to another housing estate.
Clutching my knife, I headed towards another house.
Hahaahahahaha! This was dope!
Before reading last 2 lines I assumed that the multiple footsteps are of policemen & now he will face the murderer on the way… But u proved me wrong by great plot twist….;->
if u dont know what just happend in the story i will put it in a easy way:
The man heard footsteps comin up da stairs, so he climbed out the window and ran out to the steet into another house with he a knife . Therefore, he is the killer in the owners house. he had 2 escape from the owners before he gets caught!
if ur a person dat knows know: isnt that crazy!? INCREDIBLE TWIST!!
if ur a person that dosnt know: ur a noodle head
wtf? i don’t get it..
AWESOME! I really didn’t see that coming!
So that man himself was the intruder?
10/10 intruderzzzz
Awesome twist! 10/10 snowflakes
Oh that was an awesome twist! The almost convinced us that he is the owner of the house.
oh wow!! awesome great story. I love the twist…
Awesome! Love the plot twist (\^-^/)
Nice twist
That twist was so unexpected!!!!
Great story!
8/10 plot twists NICE JOB!!!! PLOT TWIST!! *twirls in circles*
PLOT TWIST! YES!
twisted end!!
so good! its delicious! its like fudge! rich, creamy, Delicious!!!
WoW… Awesome Twist !
twisty story =.=
@bullies are losers &@scarykid1413 I am not taking a side but I think it wasn’t predictable however I do think its possible bullies are losers guessed it but it wasn’t predictable
K thanks :-D
really i LOVE those stories you are a good writer but let’s stop talking before i make the comments a chatroom again
it has a twisted ending!!!
oh! sfk!!
Revenge is sweet, new apartment, and outside the door.
Truce =P… And I’ve had three posted, I just don’t know how to get the links