Mommy’s Closet is a creepy poem written by a member of this website who goes by the name of Shadow_of_Darkness. The photograph below is by Joshua Hoffine.
In Mommy’s closet, I hear creaks.
In Mommy’s closet, I hear shrieks.
In Mommy’s closet, I don’t go.
In Mommy’s closet? No, no, no.
“What’s in the closet?â€, I ask in fear.
Mommy chuckles, “Nothing, Dear!â€
I will wait until the night,
When I face my biggest fright.
Terrible thoughts swirl in my head
Mommy’s closet fills me with dread.
One dark night I decide to go.
What’s in the closet? I want to know!
So when night falls I creep in
To Mommy’s bedroom with a grin,
Sneak past Mommy and Daddy’s room,
And down the corridor into the gloom.
I open the door, just a tiny crack.
A cold wind howls and pushes me back.
I twist the knob. I can’t stop now!
Inside I step, and I whisper, “Wow.â€
In Mommy’s closet, there are creaks.
In Mommy’s closet, there are shrieks.
I look and see, there’s a scary cliff!
My eyes grow big and my limbs go stiff.
Shadows, darkness, screaming too,
I always thought that ghosts said, “Boo!â€
But no they don’t, they scream in pain,
Black, sticky goo starts to fall like rain.
I cross a bridge, it’s creaky and old.
There’s a sea of fire that’s red and gold.
Metal gates form a big black “Hâ€,
All this flame makes my little eyes ache.
A little girl says, “Give me your soul!â€
She claws at my heart, and falls into a hole.
The people behind the gate have glowing red eyes,
Everything’s red, even the skies.
A scary old man lurking within,
Asks me if he can take my skin.
“No!â€, I cry when I see his knife.
“OK, then I’ll take your life!â€
“Just let me go!â€, I snap, “Right now!â€
The gate opens up, and to go back, I vow.
But I don’t get the chance, the crowd swallows me up,
They take me in like a crumb in a cup.
A lady picks me up, takes me to her home,
Where she locks me up in a big glass dome.
“Give me your soulâ€, she says, “Or give me your blood.â€
“Neither!â€, I say, and suddenly there’s a flood.
When I wake up again and start to scream.
The old woman’s knife, its silver blade gleams.
“You are a bad boyâ€, she says with a grin.
Suddenly, I scream, and my arm’s been skinned.
The old woman chews it, “Yumâ€, she said.
“Tastes good alive but better dead!â€
I run away fast, but a scary man gets me.
“Your eyes are fresh, plump and fleshy!â€
He drags me away, I scream, “Help! Help!â€
But no one comes, so I cease to yelp.
He ties me up, picks out my left eye.
Invites me to dinner, a soup of eyes!
“Yesâ€, he says, “You must stay.â€
“I don’t want to!†I want to get my way!
So he pushes me out, I’m weak and hurt.
A family catches me. They rip off my shirt.
“Your flesh looks tastyâ€, a pretty dead girl said.
“No!â€, I say. “I don’t want to be dead!â€
But they rip off my skin, on the chest, oh yuck!
They’ve crippled me, I have no luck.
They shove me out, a lady takes my foot bone.
Another man takes my vocal tone.
They make blankets of veins, clothes out of hair.
For two sad days I love in despair.
In Mommy’s closet, I hear creaks.
In Mommy’s closet, I hear shrieks.
Now I’m dead, I know, all too well,
Mommy’s closet is the gate to hell.
This is really good. You’re one of the only authors here that actually rights good, scary stuff.
( closes closet door ) heh heh really good!
Thanks.
Most people are pretty surprised when they find I’m only eleven…I got my first story, “Tree House”, published when I was 10. :)
This is a very good poem. Whoever wrote it, you should try entering it into one of those poetry competitions. It was very imaginative and creative. :)
what the h***
Such a COOL mom you have. LOL . Good poem though ;)
@furrykins i agree with you
Its a really cool and creepy poem!I love it!
poopy,poopy POOOOOPYYYYYY!!!! (Poopy means awesome in minke babble!)
@Louillan4444
Who? There is no one named “cant”
@cant
I was going to say that XD
It really does look like it.
How come in the picture, on the closet door, why is there a picture of a half naked girl? Isn’t that a children’s room?
so i suppose we are all cannibals down there, and one boy had to pay the price for his curiosity…
This reminds me of that one Adventure Time episode…
@Carcass
I never thought of it that way! You’re kind of right there, I didn’t think of that.
that creature looks like a white Wildmuttt from Ben 10.
Cool poem and that picture is cool too
That is creepy…
Dude, your mom has some weird hobbies… O_o
PS it’s “I {live} in despair”, not love. sry if that was my fault
Thanks SFK. This version is better than mine. :) THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
Seems legit..
“Hey Satan,baybe! I need that satin red dress I got from my sister,Debbie! Anniversary tonight y’know ;)”
Lol
Great poem shadow I read it on tell me your story, scaryforkids did you edit it a bit and changea few words to make it better cuz it’s really good.
Omg the pic, no sleep for me tonight…